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Story needs to be told in simple words, many concepts...
Reviewed in India on 26 May 2020
Story is okay, but writing could have been more simple.... Many concepts like shadow, vegetarians, Lord Ganesha, hosepipe are thrown at kids. Not all kids need to know all this. Also the Achoo joke is not very clear....kids can get puzzled rather than laughing.... Illustrations is okay...could also improve