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standard quest plot, with appealing central characters, interesting world, evil villains and many armed and magical conflicts...straightforward chronological telling, predictable betrayals and twists...a bit too much "sweet romance", but, on the whole, a pleasing read...cute illustrations, and very suitable for adventure-seeking teens...a pleasant read for a lazy afternoon...
I wish I could give this 4.5 stars. It's not perfect, but it's an engrossing work (as is the other half of the duology) that does not fall into the trap of triteness. The characters are fresh, the world is appealing even when it's horrid, and the plotting is excellent.
I didn't read the intro, so it wasn't until after I'd finished the second book that I discovered the author had written this in her teens. Her mature work, either under her own name or as T. Kingfisher, is spectacular and identifiable as hers. That easy identification is the only thing missing here, but all the other things I love about Vernon's work are present.
I love just about everything I've read by Ursula Vernon (and by her alias, T. kingfisher) but this book is, if not outright bad, significantly more mediocre than all those other books. The author's note says she wrote it when she was a teenager, which is more impressive than anything I've ever done, but, unfortunately, it kind of shows.
The good: Sadrao is a joy. The bad: Lyra, like many teenaged protagonist characters, falls into the common first-novel trap of having too many skills, of moving too far from where she begins too quickly. Her character arc suffers for this, I think, as do her relationships to the other characters. The awkward: -The love subplot. It is extremely perfunctory, and does not feel well developed. I know that this author can write wonderful, heartwarming love stories now, but this first one is... boring. Like dry white toast.
So... Yeah. Read *Summer in Orcus* instead. That book is amazing.
As this is a first book it certainly have some minor flaws, but beats most fantasy authors without breaking any sweat. The story has been written before, a bildungsroman without any major twists and turns, but the adventure is engaging, the gallery of persons are top notch and so endearingly likeable. This is books to read to heal, to find inner peace and give your brain a bit of rest.
This is very clearly the first novel by Ursula Vernon, and it reads a lot like a D&D campaign, which isn't necessarily the same thing as a good book. Still, the characters are clearly defined, the plot comes together without a lot of telling or telegraphing, and the Bad Guys are nicely chewing up the scenery. Read this if you are a completist, or if you like D&D that much; otherwise chalk this one up to Beginner's Writing and get you the latest from Ms. Vernon.
Having read a number of your books, under both writing names,I found this to be of reasonable quality in comparison. While I'm hardly an expert, it certainly kept my attention and flowed nicely .If there were plot problems they went unnoticed from my end. So relax, the only apology that might be needed later is if you decide to stop writing so you can become a trapeze artist in the circus!! Otherwise please carry on with what you do so well!! Such a lovely talent, thank you !
I enjoyed everything about this book. The characters, the plot, and the fact that it was real world, in a fantasy story. Though I love female empowerment, lately I have read a lot of stories that stretch my suspension of belief when it comes to the capabilities of the female main characters. Ursula spins a grounded, fascinating story that I thoroughly enjoyed. I already bought the second book in this series. I know I'll be in for a very enjoyable time. Anyone who enjoys a good fantasy story will enjoy this book.