5.0 out of 5 stars
Amazing!
Reviewed in the United States 🇺🇸 on 31 January 2021
WARNING: THIS REVIEW CONTAINS MANY SPOILERS AND SOME IDEAS THAT MIGHT SPOIL FUTURE BOOKS. IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THE BOOK YET, I ADVISE THAT YOU DO OR ELSE YOUR GOING TO BE REALLY SAD BECAUSE YOU ALREADY KNOW A LOT OF THINGS. ANYWAY, IF YOU HAVE READ THE BOOK AND DON'T WANT ANY SPOILERS OF FUTURE BOOKS, SKIP THE QUESTIONS SECTION AND THE IDEAS SECTION.
READ THIS REVIEW AT YOUR OWN RISK!!
Hey, sorry it took so long for me to make a review! I was kinda busy with other things, like school and blah blah blah. Also, thank you for adding quotation marks! It helped a lot, and overall just improved my opinion of the book. But anyway, on to the review!
-----questions-----
Okay, I started with this section because I have some pretty important questions.
Question number one:
WHAT?!?!?
Sorry, I'm just like.. so mad right now. WHYY CLIFFHANGER WHYYYYYYYY!!!
Sorry again, I am very mad at your cliffhanger. Did Steve's friends survive the lightning?? There's no way they die, right? I am so hyped for the next book! I just want to know!
Anyway, my other question is:
What powers does Cirian have?
Please tell me! If it's a secret, that's fine, but if it isn't, please please please tell me!
Question number three:
Does Cirian have any other Frankston things?
BWAHAHAHAHAA I MENT DARKSTONE HAAAAAAHAAAAHAAHAAAA!
DOES CIRIAN HAVE ANY OTHER FRANKSTON THINGS?!?
AHAAHAAHAAAA!!!!!
Anyways, that is the Cray Cray autocorrect for this review. There might be more, so keep looking!!
But seriously, does Cirian have any other darkstone things?
Like a darkstone sword?
There will probably be the answer to this in the next book, and if you hadn't already thought of it, you could add it to the book!
Anyway, last question.
Where would you find darkstone? In the nether? The end? Or just in the overworld?
That is the end of the questions section, so onto the next section!
-----ideas-----
As I said in the questions area, Cirian could have other darkstone
Equipment, like a sword or armor or something.
I said this in my last review, and just in case you didn't see it, can Steve tame a wolf? He could be going through those dark wood
Forest things (again, I don't know the name of it, so if you could please put it at the back of the book, that would be nice. It's not something super big, so you don't have to do it, but it would help, because I really dont like having to say 'those dark wood forest thingies'. It's a mouthful. Anyway, back to the review.)
And he could find a woodland mansion, and he would be being attacked by illagers, and then he drops a bone or something, and a wolf picks it up and gets tamed, and saves steve somehow. You can change this however you want if it's too specific, but I honestly think it is a pretty good idea. Not to brag or anything.
Hee hee...
Also, can you make something like 'best reviewer of the book'?
Something like this:
The best reviewer of the book is.....
Disboiiscool12345!!
So yeah. That would be cool.
Anyway, onto the next part!
-----news-----
BREAKING NEWS!
DISBOIISCOOL12345 HAS DECLARED HIMSELF BLOCKY DUDE'S NUMBER ONE FAN!
Okay, I don't know about number one fan, but I'm definitely somewhere in the top three.
*cough cough first place cough cough*
Lol.
-----spelling errors-----
Hmmmm....
Oh yeah!
You seemed to be typing pretty fast, because I saw some words that were spelled wrong, once you forgot a period, and multiple times you forgot to put quotation marks. I'm not being hard on you, I totally fixed it all in my mind, but you want to avoid having spelling errors as much as possible.
Other than that, you haven't made steve's thoughts italicized
Yet! You gotta do that!
-----random things before I do the activities section-----
I know, I know, the title is a little long, but still!
Anyway, this section is self explanatory, soo...
But, I bet you didn't know that I would be asking BLOCKY Dude questions that are not related to the story of steve!
Like here's one:
What's your favorite song?
Oh look! there's another one!
Have you ever tried out the Oculus Quest two?
Those are the only ones I could spot tonight, soo..
OMG!!
I totally forgot the ratings section!
-----ratings-----
Suspense: 1992938373799292937373780292938/10. *breaks scale* *gets hit by a piece of the scale* OW! Why does this keep happening to me?!?
Action:192929828282837737777373/10. good thing the scale is already broken, or I'd be covered in pieces of the scale!
Friendship: 9/10. It's kinda sad that Steve doesn't get to hang out with his friends a lot, because he doesn't have any stories. Oof.
Cliffhanger: 99999999999999999999999 *scale reforms all of a sudden just so that it could break* OWIE! MY BUTT!
99999999999999999999/10.
And of course: quality.
Quality: 9 1/2 out of ten. oh no! I'm so close to the maximum length! Okay I've gotta
Wrap this up now.
Overall score: 1929837373638191992/50!
Disboiiscool12345 out. See you in the next review! And sorry I couldn't add the other sections, curse you, maximum length!
Bye
{System}
Okay he left. Phew. Oh wait. Uhh...
Disboiiscool12345 has left the server.
That's what I'm supposed to say, right? Heh.
TO BE CONTINUED...
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